[alyasa]

Originally Posted by dazedcola

heres a link to an article i wrote a few months ago.

http://www.furious.com/perfect/src.html

That's fairly well-written. I'm no expert, but I think one of the things you can improve on in your writing is to make your descriptive prose less prosaic and more, well, descriptive. Meaning metaphors, analogies, similies, that kind of thing... Check out Pitchfork's writers and how, when they describe something; especially the music itself; they always manage to be very evocative and eloquent... Thanks for the article, by the way...