[gmku]

I think you did a fine job, dazed. I think writing about music performance is especially difficult. You have to describe the band/performance without becoming too flowery or overly descriptive, and I think you struck a nice balance between giving us the facts about the band and your own impressions.

The only crit I have is with the sense of history you try to give in the beginning. I think it's dangerously close to hyperbole. That kind of history is really hard to give unless you can be very factual. I'd stay away from that kind of generalizing, if I were you.