I'm not crazy about it, but I do like it. These are very good demos...nice site too. Sounds like lo-fi Bear Hands a little. Good vocal sound and lyrics, attractive and wistful guitar ostinato, cool drums and bass.
On a side note, I really enjoyed your short film "
The Dangers of Shopping." You should submit it to the Arte, IFC, and Sundance channels and see if they will use it as a bumper. And the shorter one with the pigeon was cool to look at and amusing enough.