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Originally Posted by Kloriel
Your intro is good here and you've got some rising action, but you're not taking it anywhere. An ellaboration on 'scare' would take the action over the peak and then your denouement could deal with the repercussions / consequences.
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I like the more open-ended plot for its defiance of expectations. All we know is that they kept getting scared; there are, in effect, no repercussions or consequences, simply a relentless state of existential fright. It works for me.