I'd like to share my poetry with you - Page 5

shentov · 12.05.2008, 08:31 AM

yeah, SY quotes have become part of me on every level. not only in poetry, y'know.
so they're any good? the English sounds 'correct'?

atsonicpark · 12.05.2008, 08:33 AM

I'm not much of a poem critic so I dunno. They were pleasant and easy reads, and yes the English sounded correct.

zonie44 · 05.06.2009, 01:18 AM

i just heard a song on a college radio station with these exact lyrics. the song is amazing and this is the only place i can find the lyrics on the internet. do you know the name of this band? if so please email me at zonie44@yahoo.com, thank you. the singer is female and there is a sounbd of a typewrite in the backkground, and the song is twent or so minutes long

zonie44 · 05.06.2009, 01:41 AM

what is this song? i've heard this!!

static-harmony · 05.06.2009, 01:46 AM

What lyrics you talking about?

shentov · 05.06.2009, 03:14 AM

ehm, someone stole my lyrics and made a song... that goes on some radio...
zonie44 you sound diesel to me...
and yeah...
What lyrics you talking about?

zonie44 · 05.06.2009, 03:32 AM

someone keeps erasing my posts

zonie44 · 05.06.2009, 03:35 AM

anyway it's the lyrics that atsonicpark posted, starts like this

Old tempest up again
And none within my darkened eyes
Has dreaming spun you round bout the head you are escaping with
Is it too far
The scenery goes
Always alone when shaped like this
The heart is heaven-hued
Hiding in the seam of solar systems embracing
All spaces leaning into to get a scent of you
It's dangerous outside as well as in
Imagined for the chosen few
Confused as well as clarified
Unknown, a pixel in your tv screen
Give me truth and I'll show how you lie
Give me lies and I'll know yourself

shentov · 05.06.2009, 05:43 AM

ah, jeebus, i really thought someone taken my lyrics, not that I really got mad or something, just uber inqisitive...

you have to ask atsonicpark, has to be his band.
or else.

artsygrrl · 11.07.2009, 09:28 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by shentov

Градските улици
са бягаща пътека.
Аз търча като луд
и край мен
празни сгради,
институти,
кооперации-
всичко се върти
на кадър.
Аз хвърча
и не помръдвам.

Извеждам града
на разходка
(с каишка).

Градските улици
са бягащи пътеки.

Shentov, yr poetry is awesome! But your written language is so strangely beautiful that I had to comment on that also.
...do you have more poetry to share with us?

sal. · 05.03.2010, 03:21 PM

языка—властитель Поэзия
гений высекает чудо камня Из
легка речь если сердце Теплеет
речений красота ласкает слух И

Dr. Eugene Felikson · 05.03.2010, 03:42 PM

Sal. is the best writer on SYG.

12.05.2008, 08:31 AM	#81
shentov expwy. to yr skull Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Bulgaria Posts: 1,223	yeah, SY quotes have become part of me on every level. not only in poetry, y'know. so they're any good? the English sounds 'correct'? __________________
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12.05.2008, 08:33 AM	#82
atsonicpark invito al cielo Join Date: Apr 2006 Posts: 28,843	I'm not much of a poem critic so I dunno. They were pleasant and easy reads, and yes the English sounded correct. __________________
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05.06.2009, 01:18 AM	#83
zonie44 empty page Join Date: May 2009 Posts: 7	i just heard a song on a college radio station with these exact lyrics. the song is amazing and this is the only place i can find the lyrics on the internet. do you know the name of this band? if so please email me at zonie44@yahoo.com, thank you. the singer is female and there is a sounbd of a typewrite in the backkground, and the song is twent or so minutes long
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05.06.2009, 01:41 AM	#84
zonie44 empty page Join Date: May 2009 Posts: 7	what is this song? i've heard this!!
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05.06.2009, 01:46 AM	#85
static-harmony invito al cielo Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: outside L.A Posts: 5,156	What lyrics you talking about? __________________
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05.06.2009, 03:14 AM	#86
shentov expwy. to yr skull Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Bulgaria Posts: 1,223	ehm, someone stole my lyrics and made a song... that goes on some radio... zonie44 you sound diesel to me... and yeah... What lyrics you talking about? __________________
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05.06.2009, 03:32 AM	#87
zonie44 empty page Join Date: May 2009 Posts: 7	someone keeps erasing my posts
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05.06.2009, 03:35 AM	#88
zonie44 empty page Join Date: May 2009 Posts: 7	anyway it's the lyrics that atsonicpark posted, starts like this Old tempest up again And none within my darkened eyes Has dreaming spun you round bout the head you are escaping with Is it too far The scenery goes Always alone when shaped like this The heart is heaven-hued Hiding in the seam of solar systems embracing All spaces leaning into to get a scent of you It's dangerous outside as well as in Imagined for the chosen few Confused as well as clarified Unknown, a pixel in your tv screen Give me truth and I'll show how you lie Give me lies and I'll know yourself
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05.06.2009, 05:43 AM	#89
shentov expwy. to yr skull Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Bulgaria Posts: 1,223	ah, jeebus, i really thought someone taken my lyrics, not that I really got mad or something, just uber inqisitive... you have to ask atsonicpark, has to be his band. or else. __________________
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05.03.2010, 03:21 PM	#91
sal. empty page Join Date: Dec 2009 Posts: 3	языка—властитель Поэзия гений высекает чудо камня Из легка речь если сердце Теплеет речений красота ласкает слух И
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05.03.2010, 03:42 PM	#92
Dr. Eugene Felikson invito al cielo Join Date: Jun 2008 Posts: 7,571	Sal. is the best writer on SYG.
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